Audience Research: Updates

We have added a brief summary of your opening to our focus group on facebook, here we hope to gain feedback and ideas from our target audience

Here is a brief summary to our opening sequence. Please could you comment saying:

• What you like about it?
• Is this what you would expect from a Chick flick genre? If no what you you expect to happen? 
• What do you think could be added to make it more interesting or relevant to the Genre? 
• What would you expect to happen in the rest of the film? 
• If you saw this opening would you want to watch the rest of the film? If no what could be added to make you want to watch it?

Synopsis

Our opening sequence is about a girlfriend and boyfriend getting ready to meet each other, the girl is all excited and making sure everything is perfect but the boy is just sat playing on his Xbox.

It starts by you seeing the girl and boy in their bedrooms, on a split screen. The girl is brushing, drying and straightening her hair and the boy is turning on his Xbox, the girl shortly moves onto doing her makeup and you see her organising various outfits to see which looks best. The boy throws on some clothes, not bothering if their clean and sits down as he starts to play on his Xbox. Once the girl is dressed and ready to meet him you see her walking out of her front door and to the end of her drive, during this you see a different girl enter the boys room they kiss and you then she the boy texting his girlfriend saying ‘I can’t meet you babe, sorry’. The Screen fills with the girl as she receives the text message and that’s where it ends.